Two-Page Spread Peer Feedback and Revisions
Introduction In my previous blog post, I explained my final two-page spread and all of the choices I made. After finishing my spread, I received peer feedback regarding what I can do to improve my spread. In this post, I will be reviewing some of the suggestions I received and deciding whether or not to implement them in my two-page spread. My aim for this blog is to make revisions with the goal of making my final product as refined as possible. My original two-page spread is displayed below. Suggestions One and Two One of the largest issues mentioned was that I needed to add more color to my spread, a suggestion I received for this was to revert my images from black and white to color. I decided to combine this suggestion with another I received: to include a picture of Maus instead of Walk Two Moons , as I do not discuss Creech's novel much. I attempted to fix these two problems by including an image of Maus in color, aiming to kill two birds with one stone. After adding the ...